Herrtage places the ‘r’ in ‘ther’ between brackets, but it is clearly present in the manuscript.
back to note sourceI have emended ‘resteyne’ to ‘reteyne’ (as the MED suggests).
back to note sourceHerrtage suggests emending ‘worde’ to ‘wone’ to achieve something nearer a rhyme. Mills also so emends.
back to note sourceI follow Herrtage and Mills in emending the ms. reading ‘age’ to ‘elde,’ which restores the rhyme.
back to note sourceI have emended ‘Bot’ (which makes no sense here) to ‘By.’
back to note sourceMills emends ‘thay’ to ‘thayr.’
back to note source‘Passus’ and ‘fitt’ (which is an English translation of the Latin term) refer to structural units within a poem. The divisions into passus or fitts are not regularly marked in the manuscript. At this point the manuscript reads ‘Prymus passus the first Fytt.’ This probably marks the end of the first passus and the beginning of the second. The passus beginning at line 814 is indicated in the manuscript without a number.
back to note sourceI follow Mills in emending ms. ‘lawe’ to ‘laye,’ which restores the rhyme.
back to note sourceI follow Mills in emending ‘Eeven’ to ‘Even.’
back to note sourceI follow Herrtage and Mills in adding ‘care’ to this line.
back to note sourceHerrtage notes that ‘on evynhaunt’ is probably ‘a corruption of avenaunt’ (meaning ‘gracious’ or ‘noble’ here) which appears in different forms in lines 807 and 917. Mills emends the ms. by deleting ‘on.’
back to note sourceIn this line I follow Mills’ reconstruction rather than Herrtage’s (‘For[th to Mela]yne’). The line in the manuscript clearly begins with a B.
back to note sourceHerrtage takes ‘gones’ as an alternate form of ‘gomes’ (men). Mills emends to ‘gomes.’
back to note sourceAt least one leaf of the manuscript is lost at this point. In the missing lines, Charlemagne apparently tells one of his knights to ride to France for help.
back to note sourceI follow Mills in emending ms. ‘wills’ to ‘wille.’
back to note sourceMills emends ‘mekills’ to ‘mekille.’
back to note sourceThe manuscript ends at this point.
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